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mishou
06-08-2006, 06:50 PM
I know Amy started a Haiku thread a while back and it's now bursting at the seams with poetry but I thought it was time to make things official. How 'bout creating some art to go along with those words?

For those of you who are interested, I've done a bit of research on the actual rules of Haiku. Yes, there are rules other than the 5,7,5 format. Not that we really care about rules around here LOL But I thought it was interesting so here's some recaps from a few Haiku websites:


I think these are generally considered the 3 major rules if you want to attempt to write the formal kind of Haiku. Check out the more detailed run down at the website here (http://www.toyomasu.com/haiku/)

1) The Metrical Pattern
- 3 lines with 5, 7 and 5 syllables respectively

2) Cutting
- divides the Haiku in two
- physically with a colon or ellipsis at the end of the first or second line
- thematically by creating an “imaginative distance between the two sections”

3) Nature/Seasons
- usually are nature-themed and contain a ‘seasonal’ word that indicates in which season the Haiku is set


At the wikipedia (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku) article about Haiku you can read the entire history of the artform but they also explain about the 'American' version which is a little less strict with rules. Here's an excerpt:

"While traditional hokku focused on nature and the place of humans in nature, modern haiku poets often consider any subject matter suitable, whether related to nature, an urban setting, or even a technological context. Traditional hokku required a long period of learning and maturing, but contemporary haiku is often regarded as an "instant" form of brief verse that can be written by anyone from schoolchildren to professionals.
Due to the various views and practices today, it is impossible to single out any current style or format or subject matter as definitive "haiku". Nonetheless, some of the more common practices in English are:
• Use of three (or fewer) lines of no more than 17 syllables in total;
• Use of metrical feet rather than syllables. A haiku then becomes three lines of 2, 3, and 2 metrical feet, with a pause after the second or fifth;
• Use of a caesura to implicitly contrast and compare two events or situations.

And finally, here's a Resource Page (http://www.ahapoetry.com/haiku.htm) you can check out. One of the more interesting articles there in my opinion is the one called "Rules of Haiku that have come and gone" There are 65 listed and you could probably have tons of fun challenging yourself to try following a different rule with each Haiku.

So there you have it. Haiku in a nutshell. Now get busy creating artquirks to go along with your poems! Don't forget to link back here so we can take a look!

webchyck
06-08-2006, 08:30 PM
Yes, I want to see some art and haiku pairings, too! Might even do one! tee hee!

Fiddlette
06-11-2006, 03:08 AM
Very cool challenge, Meesha! And you are a doll to do all that research and bring it to us! Thank you! :)

Artist in Residence
07-18-2006, 10:57 AM
This looks so fun-- I never knew how technical and scientific Haiku was. I'm going to give this a shot but I'm not sure if I can do it. :rolleyes:

Juli

Pixeldigger
07-18-2006, 12:35 PM
I thought that an Haiku deserved an ATC

Storm (http://www.digitalartquirks.com/photopost/showphoto.php?photo=1403&page=0)

mishou
07-18-2006, 08:31 PM
Oooh, another poet in our midst :) Great one Judy! Love your ATC!

Pixeldigger
07-19-2006, 05:15 AM
Here is a Haiku which I wrote some time ago, but I put it to a recent photo of the canal where I walk if I am feeling up to it; it is very close to my home. I know the break isn't at the end of a line, but according to a Japanese friend of mine, this is acceptable within the looser rules and just makes the poem more interesting.

Peace (http://www.digitalartquirks.com/photopost/showphoto.php?photo=1410&cat=501)

Here is a more formal one:

Mayfly (http://www.digitalartquirks.com/photopost/showphoto.php?photo=1424&nocache=1)

Pixeldigger
07-20-2006, 08:26 AM
There is so much horror in the news, that when I saw this willow, I had to paint a haiku. The words are with it, but the painting says it all; an explanation is attached. Sorry it is so fuzzy, but I tried downloading it twice under different file names and it doesn't download as sharp as it really is.

Haiku (http://www.digitalartquirks.com/photopost/showphoto.php?photo=1420&nocache=1)

Pixeldigger
07-20-2006, 05:02 PM
Properly speaking, haiku with art is called haiga. I just found this out, so I thought I would share. It is only haiga if the words are combined in the image.

Pixeldigger
07-22-2006, 04:09 AM
I wrote this haiga yesterday. I have a friend who was suddenly taken ill and now she is in ICU

Life (http://www.digitalartquirks.com/photopost/showphoto.php?photo=1440&cat=501&limit=recent)

kygirl
12-16-2006, 08:17 AM
A haiku dedicated to my increasingly short attention span (I hope it's the holidays):

Feeling poetic,
For the quirksters I must rhyme,
Oops, the muse is gone.

webchyck
12-16-2006, 01:20 PM
Where is fickle Muse?
Dancing on the edge of thought:
Real life crushes Her.

kygirl
12-16-2006, 07:54 PM
Becky, you always know just the right thing to say, even in haiku.

webchyck
12-16-2006, 11:26 PM
I thought it was nicer than saying "where the f*** is my MUSE!?!" LOL!

(Sorry!)

kygirl
12-17-2006, 10:14 AM
Now you're just being naughty! LOL

webchyck
12-17-2006, 12:52 PM
She was so naughty
They banned her from the Quirkhood;
Then regretted it.

kygirl
12-17-2006, 03:35 PM
Alas, Quirk princess
Spouting off witticisms,
While losing your crown.

(I always wanted to use the word "alas" in a sentence."

webchyck
12-17-2006, 06:09 PM
Yeah..."alas" is a great word!

graybonnie
12-17-2006, 06:10 PM
You ladies are too silly....LOL

Pixeldigger
01-22-2007, 01:18 PM
Spinning endlessly:
I stay still in the centre
of a maelstrom world.

Once I have recovered, this would be a good haiku to put to art; in the meantime, I don't like it one bit.

kygirl
01-22-2007, 05:20 PM
Love the haiku, Judith. Hope you're feeling better soon.

webchyck
01-22-2007, 07:24 PM
Oh Judith...I'm assuming that with labyrinthitis you have the constant sensation of spinning? I hate that! Of course the only times I've had the feeling have been during days of extreme drunkennes...so not an ongoing thing..quite short-term. But still...not pleasant. Feel better soon!

kygirl
04-11-2007, 01:55 PM
If you love haiku and crafting, you simply have to check out today's Stamps, Paper, Scissors (http://stampspaperscissors.typepad.com/stamps_paper_scissors/)blog. I especially like the glittery steak one.

digime
04-11-2007, 02:58 PM
Wife needs stamping time
Does husband really need to
Have clean underwear?
(from Stamps Paper Scissors blog)

ROFL! Thanks for the link to these Donna...my husband has given up and does his own now!

graybonnie
04-11-2007, 04:03 PM
Donna, thanks for the laugh! My husband has been going the laundry for years. BTW, did you see the cute altered tin boxs?

indybev
04-11-2007, 08:32 PM
So, OK, now you've got me haiku-ing around! Haven't Haiku'd in a long time!

Pixeldigger
04-12-2007, 05:50 AM
Inspired by a walk in the park


ROAST DINNER
Neonatal lambs
do not know of their future,
playing in wild mint.

indybev
04-12-2007, 12:12 PM
Time for a DUH question from yours truly. To date I've been posting everything to Member Galleries, because I'm not sure what goes where when. For example, where should I have posted my response to the Haiku challenge...in Community Projects and Challenges? I keep looking for Newquirk 101, but haven't found it yet!

kygirl
04-12-2007, 02:15 PM
We're not too hung up on categories here. Since we don't have one for Wordcraft-inspired layouts, why not post it in Etc. or Member Galleries. The important thing is to post a link here so that we can see what you've done.

P.S. I love that you ask questions. There's so much going on here that I know it's sometimes hard to understand.

graybonnie
04-12-2007, 05:41 PM
I do like the idea of NewQuirk 101. Maybe we should think about how we could come up with something.

indybev
04-20-2007, 08:03 PM
Oh gosh, duh, I'm not too proud to show my ignorance. Heaven knows I've had enough practice! Soooo - how do I "post a link here?" Glad you like the idea of NewQuirk 101. I kept going to FAQ, but could never seem to find my answers there. And -- while we're at it -- I have created a self-portrait I'd like to be my avatar, but when I make it 80 x 80 pixels I can count the squares! Can anybody give me a clue? Signed: Clueless in Indy .. ahem!

kygirl
04-20-2007, 08:47 PM
Posting a link is easy. Simply, go to the gallery and go to the page of the art you would like to link. Highlight the hyperlink in the bar at the top of the page and hit control and C at the same time. Now come back to the forum, tell us about your work, and hit control and V at the same time to paste the link.

I'm trying to figure out why you're getting pixelation on your avatar? What size did you use to design the original art? I normally design avatars as 2x2 inch layouts at 300 dpi, and then reduce them when I'm finished.

indybev
04-21-2007, 11:24 AM
Thanks, Donna, for the info. I think part of my problem with the avatar has been Digital Image Pro. (I'm working my way up to Photoshop!). Thanks also for the info on the link thing. It seems to be taking me forever to master all the nuances of this site, and thank heaven you've all been patient with me!

happyrobyn
04-21-2007, 03:24 PM
Desperately need sleep:
Packing every spare moment.
Can't wait to be moved.

webchyck
04-23-2007, 07:44 PM
Hey Robyn! It'll be over before you know it! Hang in there!

happyrobyn
04-23-2007, 08:40 PM
The days are too long
Sleep almost non-existant
Worth it in the end

Thanks Becky!!!!

Pixeldigger
05-23-2007, 07:44 AM
Sleep deprivation
rewarded by dawn chorus;
Geese honk, a new day.

indybev
05-30-2007, 12:53 PM
SILENCE INTERRUPTED
Jet flight, train whistle
Siren wail, traffic humming
Absence of silence.
***
ON STARTING SMALL
Raindrop, trickle, stream
Creek, river, sea and ocean
Dream large miracles.
***

LIFE
Ending, beginning
A never-ending circle
The soul's quest for truth.

kygirl
05-30-2007, 09:43 PM
Beautiful, Bev. That last one would make a beautiful ATC.