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PamPie
02-04-2008, 12:16 PM
We have several poets among our ranks, and this thread is devoted to Haiku!
I will start by giving a word - the next person must write a haiku that includes the given word, then list a word for the next person's haiku, and so on. This could be endless, but fun too ;)
Here we go...
First word: bubble
indybev
02-04-2008, 10:07 PM
Beautiful bubble
Happy, airy, light and bright
Alas! Burst too soon.
Next word: Cloud
Pixeldigger
02-05-2008, 12:42 PM
White, grey and thunder
clouds race and break from reason
walls twist - tornado
dragon
ScrapAlice
02-06-2008, 11:47 PM
Time flies past my eyes
escaping in fantasies.
My butt is "dragon".
Sorry. Couldn't resist a pun today.
raindrop.
Pixeldigger
02-07-2008, 06:14 AM
Slowly meandering
raindrop held firmly in place -
Winter came early
Bamboo
kygirl
03-11-2008, 12:44 PM
Rooted like bamboo
The child grew tall and graceful
Filling up my heart.
New Word: Spring
indybev
03-11-2008, 07:30 PM
Oh, Robin Redbreast
So good to see you again
A new song to sing!
HOPE
Pixeldigger
04-18-2008, 07:48 AM
Hope sings softly
on the whispering breeze,
buds burst with joy.
Lotus
wmnwrtr
05-27-2008, 02:29 PM
Unfold graceful leaves
Welcoming the sun's kisses
Lotus blossom sings
pond
PamPie
05-27-2008, 03:42 PM
Cattails stand upright
At the edge of the blue pond
Frogs whisper ribbits.
plaid
wmnwrtr
05-27-2008, 08:12 PM
Tartan pleats swirling
His manly calves motion me
Glimpse under the plaid
cougar
ScrapAlice
05-28-2008, 11:31 PM
Catholic school girls
dressed all alike in their skirts.
Bad girls don't wear plaid.
:eek:
tomato
ScrapAlice
05-28-2008, 11:35 PM
Tartan pleats swirling
His manly calves motion me
Glimpse under the plaid
cougar
I didn't see yours when I wrote mine, but yours is WAY better!
He drove a Cougar,
a shiny black Mercury.
He was cool back then.
Now, how about tomato? :o
wmnwrtr
06-01-2008, 02:40 PM
in long ago days
sitting pretty in a row
tomatoes for looks
My m-i-l told me that in her day, tomatoes were considered unhealthy to eat so they used them for decoration on windowsills.
new word:
streams
gothmama
06-01-2008, 03:04 PM
traffic moves in streams
folks travel, safe in their cars
jack-knife truck. Danger!
new word: vessel
indybev
06-01-2008, 08:58 PM
His vessel set forth
Skimming before gentle winds
God, return him safe to me.
Charm
wmnwrtr
06-02-2008, 07:03 PM
His twinkling eyes flash
Charm oozes through sparkling teeth
Sales pitch rings no truth
Watch
ruthpics
06-02-2008, 07:56 PM
The heart is frozen
Like broken hands on a watch
Now it cannot beat
new word: rise
indybev
06-02-2008, 08:28 PM
When challenged by fate
We rise to the occasion
Finding strength within.
Strength
ruthpics
06-04-2008, 09:16 AM
Strength comes from within
Reaching down deep in my soul
I grasp and hold on
new word: grace
indybev
07-16-2008, 01:06 PM
Lord, grant me wisdom
To live by the moral truths
With ample dash of grace.
New Word: Tomorrow
PamPie
07-16-2008, 02:38 PM
Fading rays of light
The breath of the day sighs deep
Tomorrow is near.
next word: edgy
kygirl
07-23-2008, 12:15 PM
Skies are darkening.
Feeling edgy and unsure.
Something wicked comes.
FLOWING
PamPie
09-03-2008, 04:06 PM
Cold is the water
Flowing down green mountainsides.
Boulders shiny wet.
next: precise
kygirl
09-24-2008, 05:35 PM
Autumn leaves falling,
Tumbling like graceful gymnasts;
Precisely, they land.
New word: trust
wmnwrtr
01-26-2009, 02:46 PM
The bud rests within
Awaiting the call of spring
To trust requires time.
next theme:
amuse
kygirl
02-01-2009, 09:53 AM
Amuse me, she cried.
My act will blow you away,
Replied winter winds.
Groan. :p
Next word: LOVE
Barry
02-03-2009, 12:26 PM
Donna says I never listen to her. At least I think that's what she says. But I do. Sometimes it just takes a while for the words to sink in and provoke a response.
She mentioned a haiku challenge, and that the haiku had to include "amuse." But that was on Sunday. Super Bowl Sunday. That information sunk into my brain and percolated until yesterday afternoon. I was driving to lunch when the following came to be, unbidden. I call it "Queen Victoria's Place in the Art World":
Ever a patron.
Never an inspiration.
She was not a muse.
I apologize to those of you who hate puns. Donna tells me there are some of you on here. But I've been living with a punster for going on 30 years now, and it rubs off.
I know "amuse" is not the word anymore. I'll try to catch up:
Love is all you need?
Ponder: You need 99 cents.
To download the song.
Am I supposed to set the new key word now? If so, it's "snow."
indybev
02-03-2009, 11:26 PM
Having received a total of 16 inches of it in the past week, snow is a 4-letter word right now, Bear, but I'll try to rise to the occasion,--and thanks for joining us. I was a mused.
Fluffy flakes of snow
Painting all a pristine white
Please! Someplace else go.
New word: Green
kygirl
02-20-2009, 10:07 AM
The trees are mourning
Limbs lost during winter's blast
Awaiting green buds.
CREATE
Pixeldigger
02-21-2009, 03:20 PM
Sighs of mist create
Fingers over the dawn lake,
Swans land, feet outstretched.
Begin
kygirl
02-24-2009, 08:41 PM
Oh, that's lovely, Judy.
Begin with our world
The dawn of creativity
God's great masterpiece.
BLOOM
indybev
04-24-2009, 11:22 AM
Smell the fragrant earth
The promise of God fulfilled
In the bloom of Spring
Garden
Pixeldigger
04-27-2009, 08:35 AM
Dawn chorus wakens
The garden begins anew -
pale green shoots arise.
song
wmnwrtr
06-28-2009, 08:21 PM
Bring with the morning
Song of my sunshine's rising
Sweet birds of the dawn
whisper
Pixeldigger
07-20-2009, 12:19 PM
Whisper sweet nothings
in the bashful bloom of youth
or precious old age.
graceful
kygirl
07-20-2009, 12:45 PM
Graceful, dancing child,
Whirling in the summer rain,
Don't you see I'm wet?
Space
wmnwrtr
08-12-2009, 07:24 PM
Unfolding outward,
Long ribbons trace the endless miles
Space fills in-between.
Honey
kygirl
02-14-2010, 09:53 AM
Beautiful lotus,
Symbol of all that is good,
Destroyed by the storm.
Next word: Forget
Susan's Crafty Chaos
03-29-2010, 06:24 AM
Forget the timeless
March of decay toward a
Final scream of ends.
And, on a brighter note: cheesecake :D
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